Day 1: Fish Island
Gracefully, on a warm sunny day, the sinister elephantine fish swam in the tropical lake. What he really didn't notice was the giant farm on top of his back. The same time the farm people started to move but they didn't notice soon after, They were really moving. They could see ripples forming in the water below. Would they make it stop? Soon after they also saw the fish one of the children got a knife and dropped it down on the fish. The fish thew water at them to get of farm they were sinking
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Past ones prime, worldly wise yet tired Joe staggers wobbly with wrinkled legs in other words Joe is old.
Day 2 The Rickety Bridge
Recklessly, one of the children survived but everything else was gone, her home ,her family ,her toys and clothes. In the middle of a lonely tropical lake a little girl lays in the water struggling to keep herself alive she lands on a dry forest. By 2 o'clock to 5 o'clock she has been savagely looking for something to eat. In the forest were lots of weird sound(scary sounds) when she peeks in the bushes the girl hears a twig snap she cautiously takes big steps back then a fierce wolf comes out to feed on its prey. She runs like there was no tomorrow (which was going to happen) she found a brick wall and banged it hard everywhere. Then a small door opened and she ran through it. Then she saw the most old bridge in the world it must have been 2000 years old to be this wobbly the wolf was following her trace she had no choice. This was the only way out. There was no turning back now. She fearlessly crossed the overly aged bridge that was leaning on one side and was about to fall any second.
Day 3: The Magic Tree
Mysteriously, the frightened girl went past the bridge but she was confused. There was a barren valley with bones covering the ground and the sky was black. But something else caught her sight it was a tree not just any tree. This tree was different to other trees. It contained magic. It had wrinkled branches and dusty orange leaves like no other. The poor girl was in a spell which causes her to approach the beautiful illusion she pushes her legs towards the tree she remembers her mothers saying "you'll never know unless you try it". Finally her legs stop and wait for a minute then they jump in the portal along with the rest of her body. Sad things happen in life like accidentally walking in a valley called THE VALLEY OF DEATH and being cast in a spell by a bunch of bones the climbing in the tree of death and vanishing in the pile bones just know you are the bones.
