Anxiously, she took a step through the tunnel and found herself in an unusual place with millions of books. A normal place with hundreds of shelf's is a library but this had flying books...This was no ordinary library. She found a chair which no one had been on she took the precious advantage of siting her aching body since she went through the dark tunnel. As she sat she spotted her favourite book that her mother used to read her. her nose was always stuck in that book for hours but now forever.
Hi Debbie, well done on using an -ly sentence starter and an AAAWWUBBIS sentence (as). A great start to your paragraph. Could you possibly describe the chair that no one has sat on? What does it look like?
ReplyDeleteHello Nicole, thank you for commenting on my blog post. The chair was...
ReplyDeletea dark navy just like the sky at night, it has springs unravelling waiting to pop, wrinkled skin for no one had come to iron its sheet.
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